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Hi, Tom, I am happy to have become your friend. Let me introduce myself. I am thirty one year olds. I live in Kowloon Tong. I have brother, father and mother. I like eating hamburgers becuase they are tasty. I have been dating Mandy for six months. We always go to Causeway Bay.I have been playing basketball since I... 顯示更多 Hi, Tom, I am happy to have become your friend. Let me introduce myself. I am thirty one year olds. I live in Kowloon Tong. I have brother, father and mother. I like eating hamburgers becuase they are tasty. I have been dating Mandy for six months. We always go to Causeway Bay.I have been playing basketball since I was ten year olds. I have acquired skills in playing basketball. 以上篇文係介紹我自己，想問下d句子有無錯。
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Leo，我幫幫你～ ☆ヾ(???)ノ ［今次你終於肯有信心一次寫一篇文出來，好！］ Hi, Tom, I am happy to have become your friend. Hi, Tom, I am happy to be your friend. （這樣說簡單、直接、自然一點） Let me introduce myself. （OK） I am thirty one year olds. I am thirty-one years old. I live in Kowloon Tong. （OK） I have brother, father and mother. I live with my brother and my parents. （人人皆有 father and mother，因此不會這樣說。） I like eating hamburgers becuase they are tasty. I like eating hamburgers because they are tasty. I have been dating Mandy for six months. （OK，正如我之前 email 跟你說） We always go to Causeway Bay. （OK，正如我之前 email 跟你說） I have been playing basketball since I was ten year olds. I have been playing basketball since I was ten years old. I have acquired skills in playing basketball. （OK） 連起來，整段文章可以是： Hi, Tom, I am happy to be your friend. Let me introduce myself. I am thirty-one years old. I live in Kowloon Tong. I live with my brother and my parents. I like eating hamburgers because they are tasty. I have been dating Mandy for six months. We always go to Causeway Bay. I have been playing basketball since I was ten years old. I have acquired skills in playing basketball. 2014-02-11 12:22:06 補充： 我贊同 Jenkin 的觀點。 但我今次很欣賞發問者終於肯勇敢地踏出第一步，寫出一段文字再分析。 對他來說是好開始。 我一直也希望他的信心可以強一點。 希望一步一步來吧。
其他解答:
have become your friend意思係已經係朋友-就不用介紹啦！所以我估你係對方接受成為朋友-英文這開始朋友關係叫know you as a friend或befriend(ed) you。介紹的內容零零碎碎，我把內容重整理一下，要有點文路，由細講到大(遠回憶到近代)似乎較合理(時間邏輯)；另外學吓用連接詞把相關-有連繫關係或意思延續的句子連結，不能每一樣介紹都係好像餐單項目一句句獨立句。 Hi, Tom, I am happy to have known you as a friend. Let me introduce myself. I live in Kowloon Tong with my father and mother and a brother. I have been playing basketball since I was ten years old (不是year olds), therefore I have acquired skills in playing basketball. I like eating hamburgers because they are tasty. I have been dating Mandy for six months and we always go to Casueway Bay.
大關英文作文的問題想問下
發問:
Hi, Tom, I am happy to have become your friend. Let me introduce myself. I am thirty one year olds. I live in Kowloon Tong. I have brother, father and mother. I like eating hamburgers becuase they are tasty. I have been dating Mandy for six months. We always go to Causeway Bay.I have been playing basketball since I... 顯示更多 Hi, Tom, I am happy to have become your friend. Let me introduce myself. I am thirty one year olds. I live in Kowloon Tong. I have brother, father and mother. I like eating hamburgers becuase they are tasty. I have been dating Mandy for six months. We always go to Causeway Bay.I have been playing basketball since I was ten year olds. I have acquired skills in playing basketball. 以上篇文係介紹我自己，想問下d句子有無錯。
最佳解答:
Leo，我幫幫你～ ☆ヾ(???)ノ ［今次你終於肯有信心一次寫一篇文出來，好！］ Hi, Tom, I am happy to have become your friend. Hi, Tom, I am happy to be your friend. （這樣說簡單、直接、自然一點） Let me introduce myself. （OK） I am thirty one year olds. I am thirty-one years old. I live in Kowloon Tong. （OK） I have brother, father and mother. I live with my brother and my parents. （人人皆有 father and mother，因此不會這樣說。） I like eating hamburgers becuase they are tasty. I like eating hamburgers because they are tasty. I have been dating Mandy for six months. （OK，正如我之前 email 跟你說） We always go to Causeway Bay. （OK，正如我之前 email 跟你說） I have been playing basketball since I was ten year olds. I have been playing basketball since I was ten years old. I have acquired skills in playing basketball. （OK） 連起來，整段文章可以是： Hi, Tom, I am happy to be your friend. Let me introduce myself. I am thirty-one years old. I live in Kowloon Tong. I live with my brother and my parents. I like eating hamburgers because they are tasty. I have been dating Mandy for six months. We always go to Causeway Bay. I have been playing basketball since I was ten years old. I have acquired skills in playing basketball. 2014-02-11 12:22:06 補充： 我贊同 Jenkin 的觀點。 但我今次很欣賞發問者終於肯勇敢地踏出第一步，寫出一段文字再分析。 對他來說是好開始。 我一直也希望他的信心可以強一點。 希望一步一步來吧。
其他解答:
have become your friend意思係已經係朋友-就不用介紹啦！所以我估你係對方接受成為朋友-英文這開始朋友關係叫know you as a friend或befriend(ed) you。介紹的內容零零碎碎，我把內容重整理一下，要有點文路，由細講到大(遠回憶到近代)似乎較合理(時間邏輯)；另外學吓用連接詞把相關-有連繫關係或意思延續的句子連結，不能每一樣介紹都係好像餐單項目一句句獨立句。 Hi, Tom, I am happy to have known you as a friend. Let me introduce myself. I live in Kowloon Tong with my father and mother and a brother. I have been playing basketball since I was ten years old (不是year olds), therefore I have acquired skills in playing basketball. I like eating hamburgers because they are tasty. I have been dating Mandy for six months and we always go to Casueway Bay.
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